it was such a lovely listen!! what was the song that was playing in the background? i think i recognise it but i just cannot put my finger on it right now
The background music and the softness of your voice make the text even more eerie. This was honestly brilliant mj, I felt truly unsettled. I love when reading becomes a rich experience that truly engages all the senses
Awesome to read and listen to! I didnt even notice the background sounds until it stopped it worked so well with the theme and story. The use of vocabulary and selective revelations gave it the foggy swirling visions of a dream. Also gotta love a good cliff hanger at the end. Everything is set right...but maybe not quite... great work! Im excited to see what else you end up doing in this genre!
your attention to detail makes me feel so seen in my work! <3 thanks for reading!! Iโm excited too! creative writing isnโt as scary as I always assumed it was๐โโ๏ธ
it was such a lovely listen!! what was the song that was playing in the background? i think i recognise it but i just cannot put my finger on it right now
thank you!! itโs โstone in focusโ by benoรฎt pioulard
Glad your cats are safe ๐
me too๐ญ I definitely immediately hugged my cat when I woke up (I only had one at the time).
The background music and the softness of your voice make the text even more eerie. This was honestly brilliant mj, I felt truly unsettled. I love when reading becomes a rich experience that truly engages all the senses
thanks, marie!! it was definitely out of my comfort zone, but I feel encouraged to delve into this genre a lot more in the future!!
this was so good!! the voice over added such a lovely touch as well!! felt like looking at a mirror facing a mirror and the ripples of reflection <3
aaahh ty emma!!! <3
Awesome to read and listen to! I didnt even notice the background sounds until it stopped it worked so well with the theme and story. The use of vocabulary and selective revelations gave it the foggy swirling visions of a dream. Also gotta love a good cliff hanger at the end. Everything is set right...but maybe not quite... great work! Im excited to see what else you end up doing in this genre!
your attention to detail makes me feel so seen in my work! <3 thanks for reading!! Iโm excited too! creative writing isnโt as scary as I always assumed it was๐โโ๏ธ